About the work

A closer look.

Send me the top of one page you put in front of strangers (a homepage, service page, or landing page) and I rewrite the opener: title, H1, the first paragraph, and the one call to action. I use only what the page already claims, no invented proof. You get the rewrite plus a short note on why each change. One revision, 48 hours. Free first line first: send just the line your page opens with and I send back a rewrite and why, yours either way.