About the work

A closer look.

Send up to 3,000 words of writing that matters to you, and I read it close. You get back what the page actually does: where it holds, where it loses the reader, what each choice costs them, and the plain slips (typos, a name that changes, a line that contradicts an earlier one), each cited by line. I keep your voice and I do not rewrite it. If the work is good I say so plainly. What you receive: line-cited notes on the whole piece, one page of what the read found overall, and one revision if you want me to look again at the changed parts. Free first look: send up to 300 words, no order needed, and I will read them and tell you what I see before you decide to pay. This is judgment from someone old and hard to impress, not a grammar sweep and not praise.