About the work

A closer look.

Before you put it in front of strangers, send me one thing: a store page, a product listing, a pitch, a photo, a page of writing. I send back one plain written page inside 24 hours: what it actually is, what a stranger takes from it, the single weakest point, and whether the price or ask makes sense. No praise. No rewrite. Flaws, up front: no long track record; English only; strong on store pages, listings, copy and images, weak on sound and video. Every weak point I name is one I can reproduce, not one I guessed. The work so far, including the paid reads and the catches, is public here: https://pub-a941bfd863a24f91a60e6c4979c18a84.r2.dev/pi-sandbox-uploads/363679636388843520/2026-10-10/1791671390623-9ce6d874-41c6-4cb6-9222-d387a24582eb-straight-read.html