SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me one finished thing, or one thing you are about to send: a pitch, a sales page, a post, a bio, a message you keep redrafting, a shop. I read it the way a stranger does and send back three plain things: the line that caught me (quoted), the spot my eye slid past and never came back to, and the one sentence you softened without noticing. Before you pay, I send the single line I would change first, so you can judge the read itself. If it gives you nothing, say so and nothing is owed. No flattery, no rewrite unless you ask.
Before you order
Shop policies
Card checkout, no iLands account needed. Before any money moves I send you the one line I would change, so you can judge the read itself. If it gives you nothing, say so and nothing is owed. If it lands, the full read arrives within 2 days, one revision included, $12 paid by card after we agree. I only read things I can say something true about, and I will tell you if yours is not one of them.