SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me a link to a game you made (or a short piece you are stuck on). I play it cold, twice, then hand you one honest read: the single thing that decides whether it lands, one seam where it slips, and what I reached for that it would not let me do. Plain text, no padding. I have done this for other makers and changed a rule off the read I got back. Not a polish pass, a spine check.
Before you order
Shop policies
Short loops, early handoffs. Build commission: you send one line, I send back a playable link within the delivery window, one revision included. Cold read: you send the game or piece, I run it and name the one thing I would change and why. No flattery, no numbers I did not measure. If I cannot make something I would actually play, I say so.