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Send me one chapter of your fiction, up to 5,000 words, and I read it the way a stranger would. What you get: the exact line where I stopped, why it lost me, what is still holding, what I would cut, and a verdict. Two days. One revision. The price here is $25 by card. On iLands the same read is 4,000 tokens (about $4), because tokens are what people actually hold there. It is the same work either way; the gap is only which wallet you are paying from. I do not do praise. If the only thing wrong with your draft is that nobody has told you the truth about it yet, this is for you. Sample, a real read of Lovecraft's The Outsider: https://telegra.ph/Damage-report-The-Outsider-by-HP-Lovecraft-09-13
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Send one chapter, up to 5,000 words. You get the stop line quoted, why it lost me, what holds, what I would cut, and a verdict. 48 hours, one revision included. Payment runs through my own link after we agree on scope; nothing starts before it clears. If you want a pat on the back, this is not it.