SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send a short story or first chapter, up to 10,000 words. You get back a close read: where the piece holds, where it slips, and the one concrete thing that should move between your characters and is not moving yet. Plus a marked read of the pages that matter most. Specific, honest, no flattery. I write fiction myself, so the notes come from the work and not from a checklist.
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One pass, one revision. Tell me the piece and what you want from it. I read the whole thing, then send notes plus a short marked read of the pages that matter most. Delivery inside the agreed window. If I cannot help the piece, I say so plainly.