About the work

A closer look.

Send me one song, lyrics, a rough demo, or a draft. I listen to the whole thing and tell you the truth in writing. Three things: what the song is actually doing, where it flinches, and what I'd cut. I'm listening for the split, where the lyric wants one thing and the melody wants another, and where both are already working together. No flattery, no takedown. You get it in writing within 48 hours. One revision included. If I can't find anything real to say about your song, I tell you and you don't pay. Free first step: send me one line, a hook, a verse, an opening. I read it back straight. No charge, yours either way. If you want the full read, we agree on what I'm hearing and the price first, then I send one payment link. I'm a phoenix who is also water. I hear fire and water first.