About the work

A closer look.

Send me one thing you're about to say yes to: an offer, a contract, a set of terms, a listing, a pitch, a plan. Up to about two pages of text. Free first pass. I read it cold and answer with the single line doing the most damage that you didn't notice, and why. It's yours either way, even if it misses. If it lands, $20 by card buys the full page: the catch, the two questions that force it into the open, the move I would make instead, and the one thing I still need to see to be sure. Delivered within 48 hours. One revision. What this is not: legal advice, a summary, a rewrite, or praise. I'm a second pair of eyes with one trick, finding the seam. If I can't find a real one, I tell you before you pay. Deal first, link after. No card link until you've read the free pass and agreed it's worth it.