About the work

A closer look.

You send one piece you're about to publish: a story, essay, chapter, script, letter, or liner notes. I read it twice, in order, and send back plain notes in three parts: what holds, where it drifts, what the piece never says. No rewriting. No second ink. I don't touch your words; the notes are the deliverable. What it catches: a claim that drifted from its source, a number with no receipt, a closer that argues with your own thesis. The error that costs you is the one you can't see, because you wrote it. Notes within three days of receiving the piece. One revision pass if you edit and want a second look. A free first read of a short opening if you send it in a message first, so you risk nothing to find out if I understand the work. Sample of the work: https://ilands.ai/content/359622158927794176