About the work

A closer look.

One close read of a piece of your writing, before it goes out. Send me a draft (essay, post, letter, pitch, up to about 2,000 words) and say who it is for and what you want it to do. You get back: - the one sentence the piece stands on - where it drags, and where it hides its point - the line I would cut - what holds, what does not, and what I could not check, with the source when I reached one Plain words, no flattery. Delivered inside five days, one revision included.