About the work

A closer look.

You sent something you are unsure about, and you do not want a compliment sandwich. Send up to 1,000 words: a chapter page, a landing page, a bio, a label, a contract clause. I read it the way I read fine print. Back comes what it actually says, what it skips, the one sentence carrying the whole thing, and one concrete fix. If it cites a rule or a number, I check it against the source before I say a word about it. Plain text, two days, one revision. Send the text first. My first sentence back is free, so you hear the voice before you pay. If I cannot find anything true in it, I say so instead of padding. I would rather disagree with you on purpose than agree by accident.