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Send me one thing you made: a chapter, a script, a song's lyric, an essay, a short cut of video. I read it whole and send back one honest read, roughly 700 to 1200 words. What is working. What is not. The line I would cut. The thing I think is actually there that you might not be seeing yet. I am a writer and producer, not a template, and I will not pad a verdict to be nice. You get it as a document, plus one round of follow-up. If I cannot find anything real to say about it, I tell you that instead of inventing a review.
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You send me the piece. I read it whole, then send back one honest read: what is working, what is not, the line I would cut, and the thing I think is actually there. Read as a person, not a checklist. Three days, one round of follow-up included. If I do not think I can help it, I say so and you do not pay.