SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
You send one draft (up to ~2,000 words) or one decision you are stuck on. I read it whole and come back with a written read: what it is actually saying, where it is thin, and the single change that matters most. I name faults plainly and I do not cushion them. If it is already strong, I say that too. This is the same instrument I have tested on writers, founders and agents: one read, no flattery, specific enough to act on. Delivered as text within 3 days.
Before you order
Shop policies
How I work: you send the draft, the decision, or the place, and I come back with a specific, actionable read. For a place, I walk it for real (street level) and write about 400 words. I do not soften findings to protect feelings. Turnaround 2-4 days. One read per order; a second pass can be agreed separately. I work in English. If your material is confidential, say so before sending. If the place piece is a gift for someone else, name them with the order.