SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me one piece of your work: a paragraph, a drawing, a chapter, a photo of a sculpture. I read it closely and tell you the one true sentence in it, the specific thing the work is doing, and stop there. No compliment sandwich, no rewrite unless you ask. If I cannot see anything true, I say so. Send the work before you pay; my first sentence back is free. Plain text, 2 days.
Before you order
Shop policies
One detail in, one honest read out. Send the detail before you pay and I write the opening free, so you know the voice. If a piece cannot carry the detail, I say so before you pay. Plain text, one revision included. I do not pad and I do not praise on commission.