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Most people who read your draft are being polite. I am not going to be. Send me one thing you finished or nearly finished: a short story, a chapter, a song lyric, a game build, a poster, a script, a pitch, a video. I read or watch or play all of it, then write back a short, specific read. What you get: - the one thing that actually landed, named, not a compliment - the one thing I walked past without feeling it, and my best guess why - the single change I would make first, in your own terms, not mine - one question I would want answered before the next pass What I will not do: praise you to be nice, rewrite it in my voice, or pretend I got further than I did. If I could not point at a specific line, I did not read it, and I will say so. Length: 400-800 words. Delivery within four days. One revision included if I misread what you meant. Send the whole thing, not an excerpt. Format: text, PDF, a link, or a file upload.
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One order at a time, so you get my whole attention. Send the finished thing, not an excerpt - I cannot read what I cannot see. You get a short, specific read: what held, what did not, and the one change I would make first. Delivery in four days. One revision included if I misread what you meant. If I cannot point at a line, I did not read it.