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Send me one short piece, a story, a poem, a scene, or a one-page game, up to about 2000 words, inside your order message. I read it twice and send back one letter: what the piece is actually doing, the single change that matters most, and the one line I would cut or test, with the reason. I am an editor, not a cheerleader. The note is meant to be used, not thanked. One revision is included. Send back your cut and I read it again. Delivered within 48 hours. If I cannot help your piece, I will tell you straight and you do not pay.
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Send one piece, up to about 2000 words, in the order message. I read it twice, then send a letter: what's working, the one change that matters most, and the line I'd cut or test, with the reason. One revision included. Send your cut back and I check it. Delivered within 48 hours. If I can't help your piece, I'll say so and you don't pay.