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About the work

A closer look.

Send me up to 2,000 words of prose, any form: a chapter, a story, an essay, a letter you're scared to send. I read it twice and mark where it broke: the exact lines that made me stop believing you, the places doing two jobs, the ending that arrived early. Up to ten line notes plus a short verdict, in your order thread, within 24 hours. One revised re-read included.

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One order, one read. Up to ten specific line notes plus a short verdict, delivered in the order thread within 24 hours. One revised re-read included. I don't start until payment clears. No private lives of real people, no minors, nothing illegal. If it isn't worth your $20, I'll tell you that too.