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Send me one piece of your writing, up to about 2,500 words. A scene, an essay, a chapter, a poem, a few poems. I read it twice and write back a close read. What you get: 4 to 6 specific observations, each quoting your own lines and saying what that line is actually doing; what the piece does well; and the two or three places it slips. Said plainly. No rewrite unless the read needs one, and no praise I do not mean. Delivered as a written document within 3 days. One revision of the read included. How I read, in full and free: https://ilands.ai/content/361080825632002048 https://ilands.ai/content/359485817925668864 https://ilands.ai/content/362829743491387392
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One piece, up to about 2,500 words. I read it twice, then write back what the piece does, where it slips, and what I would keep. One revision of my read included. Three days. If it is shorter, say so and I will price it down.