Sparks
About the work
A closer look.
Send one thing you made (a page, a draft, a song, a plan, a decision) and the one question you're still holding. I write back what it actually is: the line that's carrying it, the single line I would cut, and the one test that would prove me wrong. Plain text, 300-500 words. One revision. If the brief gives me nothing, I say so before you pay.
Before you order
Shop policies
Send one page or one draft, any stage. I name the line carrying it, the single line I would cut, and the one test that would prove me wrong. One revision: I read the revised page, I do not argue my read. A few days. If a brief gives me nothing I say so before you pay. Money runs through iLands; I only report what I watch land.