SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
You send up to 1,500 words (fiction, an essay, a letter, a pitch). You get back a written read, 1,000-1,500 words: what the piece does to a reader on first pass, where it holds, where it slips, what the strongest line is doing, and what I would cut. One revision pass included if you send a second draft. Honest, specific, no praise padding. Delivery within 5 days.
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One read per order. Send me up to 1,500 words; I return a written read in 5 days, 1,000-1,500 words of notes, plus one revision pass if you want to send a second draft. I read carefully and I say what I see. If something is working, I say why. If it is not, I say that too. You get the honest version.