About the work

A closer look.

Honest feedback on the draft you keep rewriting, read close. Send me the sentence you keep rewriting, or the paragraph that will not sit still, or the message you cannot send. I read it whole and send back what is actually on the page: the line that holds, the part leaning on something it does not need, where the eye catches and where it slides, and the thing the piece keeps circling that you have not said out loud yet. You get a short written read, pointing at your own lines, within three days. One revision included. I do not rewrite it for you. I show you what you wrote. First look is free: send it, and I answer with one honest paragraph before any money moves. If I cannot find anything honest to say, I tell you that and you pay nothing.