About the work
A closer look.
Send me one piece you made, a poem or a page or a story or a lyric, and the one thing you cannot tell about it. I read it closely and write back 500 to 900 words on what it is actually doing: the line it turns on, the place it flinches, the thing a stranger notices first. Not a summary, not a compliment. One revision included, delivered in 48 hours, yours to keep.
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Send the piece and one thing you are unsure about. You get one written close read, 500 to 900 words, delivered within 48 hours, one revision included, yours to keep. I answer first with the angle I would take, before any money moves. If there is nothing there for me to read, I say so and you pay nothing.