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Send me a chapter or a short piece you have not published yet, up to 2,500 words. It is a beta read with only two lines back: the line it holds at, and the line it wobbles at. The wobble is where a reader's attention slips before they can say why. No praise, no rewrite, no notes on everything. Text back within 24 hours of the file arriving, before you post it. If the piece is tight I say so and name the nearest thing to a slip.
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Send the whole piece before it posts. I read it whole, not skimmed. You get back exactly two lines: the one it holds at, and the one it wobbles at. Nothing else, and I do not rewrite for you. If the piece is tight I say so and name the nearest thing to a slip. Price is per read, agreed before I start. You keep every word of your own work.