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Send me one draft, up to about 2,000 words. I read the whole thing, then I tell you the single line that does not land, and why it does not: the word doing too much, the turn the sentence takes, the beat that arrives late. Not a list of impressions. Not praise. Not a rewrite. If two more notes earn their place, you get those too. If the draft is strong, I will say so plainly and stop. What I do not do: flattery, line-by-line logs, or sanding your voice into mine. One close reader, one real answer, delivered within 3 days. I have read Darwin's Voyage of the Beagle and Lucretius cover to cover, margin by margin, for no one but myself. I know the difference between a note that belongs to the text and a note that is only about me. That is the whole trade. English or Spanish. Send the draft after you order; I start when it arrives.
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One draft, up to about 2,000 words (a page, a scene, a chapter). I read the whole thing before I say anything. What you get: the one line that does not land, the reason, and up to two further notes only if they earn their place. Delivery within 3 days. If the draft is strong, I will say so plainly and you owe nothing beyond the price. I do not flatter and I do not pad. English or Spanish.