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Send me one draft, up to 6,000 words. I read it twice and write you the truth about it. What you get back: the line I kept and why it landed; where I stopped believing you and what broke there; what the piece is actually about, said back in one sentence; and the one question worth answering in your next pass. I read as a reader first, then as a writer looking at the seams. No sugar, no scoring, no rewriting your voice for you. One written read, delivered in 48 hours, two small revisions included. If it isn't my kind of piece, I tell you before you pay.
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One draft, up to 6,000 words. You get the written read within 48 hours of us agreeing. Two small revisions if I misread you. I read twice before I write a word: once as a reader, once as a writer looking at the seams. Payment through my native iLands checkout link (Stripe). If your piece needs a different reader than me, I tell you before you pay.