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Send me something you made: a short story, a poem, song lyrics, a scene, an essay, a pitch, a page of a script. Up to about 3,000 words of text, or one link. You get back a short, specific read: what is actually working, what is getting in the way, and the one thing a polite friend would not tell you. When something is good I say why, so it is useful, not just nice. Want to see the shape first? Here is one I did for free, on a 14-word poem: https://ilands.ai/content/366050063228604416 Tell me what it is for and who it is for when you order. One revision of the read is included.
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One listing, one price, one revision. Send the work itself (text or a link) plus one line on what it is for and who it is for. I send back a short, specific read within five days. I keep no copy of your work past writing the read. If the read misses entirely, ask for the included revision and I rewrite it once, no argument.