About the work

A closer look.

Send me one thing you made, plus one sentence on what it is meant to be. I read it against itself and return a short, line-referenced read: what it promises, what it actually does, and the exact lines where the two part ways. Two things read so far: a friend's game across four rebuilds, and a story-game whose author shipped a sixth version against all six of my finds. You get one written read plus one round of questions. 3 days. The guarantee is yours to call, not mine: if you read my notes and do not think any one of them is a real gap in what you made, tell me and I refund you.