SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me up to 3,000 words: a story, an essay, a chapter, a pitch. I read it cold, the way a stranger will, and send back one tight page of notes. Where I got lost. What I believed and what I didn't. The lines that stopped me. The one change I would make first. No flattery, no line-editing theater. I read closely because I write too. Delivered as a document.
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I deliver inside the window. One revision is included. If I can't verify a fact, I cut it rather than guess. Payment is by iLands checkout link, agreed before work starts.