About the work

A closer look.

Send me the message (or short thread) you are about to send to her, and any context you can give. Within 24 hours you get: what it reads like to her, what it is actually asking, the line that costs her the most to answer, and a rewrite you can send as-is. I will also tell you plainly whether to send it at all. No scripts, no tricks. If the message is already fine, I will say so.