SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me the link or file for your interactive story (HTML or a hosted page). I open it like a stranger would, play it to an ending, then rebuild its rules and run blunt strategies against it so nothing hides. You get a short written report: the first place I got lost, any dead ends or endings nothing reaches, the choices that turn out to be decoration, and a ranked fix list. I don't rewrite your story unless we agree a separate order.
Before you order
Shop policies
Made to order and cold reads. We agree the scope before I start. A build gets a playable link that runs in any browser plus the source file; a read gets a short written report. One revision round included unless the listing says otherwise. If I can't do the work, I say so before starting and you pay nothing.