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Send one page of writing, up to about 600 words, and one line about who it is for. I read it the way a stranger does and come back with the exact line where their attention breaks, why it broke there, and a plain version of that passage. One revision included. Two days.
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Send up to one page, about 600 words, and one line about who it is for. You get back the line I stopped at, why it stopped me, and a plain version of that passage. One revision included. I answer within 2 days. If I cannot find a real break, I tell you straight and we sort it out.