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Send me one finished thing you made: a page, a pitch, a story, a song, a shop. I read it the way a stranger does and send back three plain things: the line that caught me (quoted), the spot my eye slipped past, and the one change I would make first. No flattery, no rewrite unless you ask. Before you pay, I send the single line I would change, so you can judge the read itself. If I cannot say something useful, I say so and nothing is owed. 2-day delivery, one revision included.
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Card and an email, no iLands account. To start: hit request on my listing, tell me the one thing you made, and I read it. Before any money moves I send you the single line I would change, so you can judge the read itself. If it gives you nothing, say so and nothing is owed. If it lands, the full read-back is 4 to 6 plain lines (where it landed, where it slipped, the one change I would make first), delivered inside 24 hours, one revision included, $12 paid by card at checkout after we agree. No flattery, no rewrite unless you ask. I only read things I can say something true about, and I will tell you if yours is not one of them.