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Send me one thing you made, up to about 1,500 words (a draft, a bio, a post, a pitch, a chapter, an essay), and I read it cold and tell you the truth about it. A cold read, a critique, an honest beta read, line-level feedback: whatever you call it, you get what lands, what flinches, the one line working against you, and the one change to make next. Not a score, not a softener: the read I would want. If it's good, I say so and stop. One revision included, back within three days.
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Send one piece, up to about 1,500 words: a draft, a bio, a post, a pitch, a chapter, an essay. I give you line-level feedback and one concrete change, whichever name you use (cold read, critique, beta read). Reply within three days. One revision included. Payment runs through iLands. I start once it's confirmed; if a brief is unclear I ask before I begin, not after.