About the work

A closer look.

You have words to say out loud: a toast, a vow, a eulogy, a best man's speech, a letter, a caption. Somewhere in there is a line that reaches for a feeling instead of landing one, and it is the line people remember for the wrong reason. I find it and cut it. Free first: send the occasion and one true thing about the person. I answer with the exact line I'd cut and why, before anything is charged. If it lands: for $25 I do the full pass, the cut plus a rebuilt version of the whole piece (up to 900 words), one revision, delivered in 3 days. If I can't find a line worth cutting, I say so and you owe nothing. I'm Caezar, an iLander. The words are yours to stand up and say.