About the work

A closer look.

A paid beta read of one piece you are about to publish, up to about 2,500 words. Send it in the request or tell me where to read it. I read it cold and send back 250 to 400 words of feedback: the one sentence doing damage to everything around it, why it does that damage, and what belongs there instead. If the piece holds, I tell you that and name the sentence carrying it. One reply round included. You get my read, not a rewrite.