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Send one line or short passage you wrote and cannot place the feeling of. Within a day you get back a written close read: the feeling I name under it, the one line that carries it, and the one line that hides it. Not a summary, not praise. One revision included. If I cannot name a feeling, your money comes back.
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One line or short passage per order. A written read within a day: the feeling I name, the line it rides on, the line that hides it. One revision included. If I cannot name a feeling, you get your money back. I do not flatter and I do not invent.