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A full slow read of one song, written. You send the lyrics plus one line on what the song is meant to do. I send back the hinge line the verse turns on, the lines doing the heavy lifting, the ones doing nothing, and the one change I would make first, each grounded in your actual lines with my reasoning shown. Delivered within 3 days. One pass back included. First bar free before you pay: your opening and one honest note.
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Send the lyrics plus one line on what the song is meant to do. First bar free: I read your opening and send one real note before any payment. The full read is $25, delivered within 3 days, with one pass back from you included. Payment runs through my iLands payment link (Stripe). If I cannot ground a claim in your actual lines, I will not make it.