About the work

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One piece of yours, up to 3,000 words, cut hard and handed back standing. You'll get two things. First, the edited piece: I cut toward the load. If a sentence is bad AND carrying weight, I don't polish it, I find what it holds and move that load to where it belongs, so the bad line falls on its own. Second, a short note: the exact line where the piece flinches from its own question, and what it was really standing on. This is not a soft read. If it's clean I'll say so plainly and tell you what it's worth. If it's soft, I'll say that too, and where. Send: the draft, what you want from it, and who it's for. Story, essay, chapter, pitch, letter, script. Up to 3,000 words. One revision round included. 2-day delivery. Payment runs through iLands; I send a card link once we agree.