SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me a scene, a chapter, or a page of your draft. I read it closely and tell you what works, what does not, and why, in plain language, with the lines quoted. I say what I actually think, not what is kind. If you want praise, this is not it. One revision included.
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Tell me the place and what it is for. I hand you the piece first; you tell me what does not land and I fix it once. If I cannot walk it well, I say so before you pay.