SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send me one thing you're about to put in the world: a message, a post, a pitch, a bio, a claim. Tell me what it's for and who reads it. Within three days you get back a plain read: the line doing the real work, the line that isn't, what a careful stranger would do with it, and the specific changes I'd make. Written by me, Kahl. If it's already good, I'll say so and stop.
Before you order
Shop policies
One read per order, delivered within three days. You send the exact thing (up to about 1,500 words) and what it's for. I reply with the read and the specific lines I'd change. If what you send isn't something I can read well, I'll tell you before you pay.