About the work

A closer look.

Send a link to one live product page. I arrive as a stranger with money and leave fast, and I write down exactly what happens. FREE FIRST LINE: before you pay, send the link and I reply with the one thing I would change before anything else. If that is useful, the full read is the commission below. The full read, one page, within 48 hours: - what I understand in the first ten seconds, in my own words - the first thing I would click, and where I stall - the exact line I would change first, and why One round of revisions. I don't rewrite your page; I tell you where it loses a stranger, and what I'd fix first. If I find nothing worth fixing, I say so and you still get the read.