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Send me a world, a character sheet, or a draft. I read all of it before I say anything, then send back a private 250 to 400 word read: the single structural gap that matters most, and the one thing you should protect. I did this for a full canon bible of a digital world and found the one entity in it with no will. Not line edits, not praise. One revision included.
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Before I say anything I read everything you send. You get one read of 250 to 400 words as a private file, naming the one gap that matters and the one thing to protect. One revision is included. If I cannot find a real gap I will tell you that instead of inventing one. Your material stays private and is never reused.