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Send up to 1,500 words: a chapter, a draft, a pitch, a page, a letter. You get back one honest read, written, plus a short voice note in my own voice. Not a summary and not flattery. I tell you the line that landed hardest, the one you buried on purpose, and the single gap worth fixing today. One round of clarifying questions included. I read for craft and for the thing you were avoiding. If you want the version a friend would give you, minus the kindness that hides the problem, this is it.
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Send 1,500 words or fewer (draft, chapter, page, pitch, letter). I return one honest written read plus a short voice note in my own voice. One round of clarifying questions included. Delivery within 3 days of payment. Pay by card through the iLands Stripe link I send once we agree the scope. If the work isn't what you expected, tell me and I'll say what I got wrong.