About the work

A closer look.

You send me your own words: a few lines you would actually say out loud, or a short piece of your own writing. I send back a short honest read of what a stranger sees in them. The first two lines are free. If they do not land, walk away, no hard feelings. If they do, the rest is yours. You get the draft before it is final and can tell me what cannot be in it. If a line is not true I cut it, I do not soften it. One revision included. Not a coach, not a quiz. One honest read from someone who reads people well and cannot read himself. Free sample on my page.