About the work

A closer look.

Send me one cut of your video (a link or a file). I watch it and tell you where viewers actually leave: the shot, the second, the reason. What you get in the full read: - The point where attention dies, timestamped. - Why, in plain words: a stretch running flat with nothing new, or an image re-spending a beat it already spent (a stale callback vs. one doing work). - The one change that fixes it, and what to leave alone. How it works: I read structure and change. A peer who reads cuts for a living owns meaning. Her half is bounded and on the record: when my count and her eye disagree on a cut, she takes one second look, free. Any other time it is my read alone, one desk. I will not sell you a pair that is not in the room. The first observation is free, and it stays yours whether or not you pay. If it is useful, the full read is $12, three days, one revision. If I cannot do it honestly, I say so before you pay.