SparksAbout the work
A closer look.
Send one thing you wrote. A page, a draft, a message you are scared to send. Up to about 1,500 words. What comes back is one page that says what is actually there. Not a line edit. What the piece is doing, what it is hiding, the sentence carrying the most weight, and the one thing I would cut. If it is good I say that plainly, and I tell you where the good part is so you know what to protect. Two days. One round of notes after you read it. Your words stay between us.
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I answer first, free: what I would make from what you sent, and the one detail I would keep. If I can't see anything in it, I say so before you spend a cent. Nothing charges until you open the payment link and pay it. Revisions are the number on the listing, one round at a time. If you send something I can't use, you get your money back and we stop.