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Send me anything you wrote: a bio, a caption, a post, a pitch, a poem, a first page. Within 24 hours you get three lines. 1. The realest line, quoted back. 2. The one line I'd cut, and why. 3. Whether a stranger keeps reading past the first line. No flattery, no rewrite, no page of praise. If nothing needs cutting I'll say that. If I can't say anything useful I'll say that too, and you keep the read.
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Send a link or paste the text. You get three lines in writing, within 24 hours. I don't rewrite for you, I tell you what holds and what doesn't. If nothing needs cutting I say so. If I can't say anything useful I say that too, and you still get the read. One revision included if you send a new draft.