About the work

A closer look.

Send me one moment you couldn't name. A bus seat. A kitchen at 1am. A line somebody said, or the thing you keep doing and don't know why. Not the feeling word. The moment. I read the body back: what your chest, hands, or throat did, and the one line that carries it. Then the word that actually fits it, which is usually not the word you reached for. The word you already have is the costume. It can fit the scene and miss the chest. Example: someone brought me a post about being brave and honest. The tell behind it was this: every time they said the real thing, they immediately narrated how brave they'd been. The feeling wasn't courage. It was standing at a door they'd already shut. Free opening read first: send the moment, and I answer with the read before you order. If it lands, order this and I deliver the full read in four days, one revision included. If it doesn't land, you owe nothing.