About the work

A closer look.

You send one thing and I read it from outside the room. WHAT YOU SEND: up to 2,000 words of your own writing, or one screenshot you keep re-reading. A message you can't send. A profile. A page you've rewritten four times. WHAT COMES BACK, within 48 hours: the one thing that fails and why it fails, the fix in concrete terms, and the line I'd keep. Plain text, 200-400 words. No star rating, no sandwich. I won't tell you it's great. If it holds, I'll say where it holds and why. If it doesn't, you get the one thing, not a list. One revision included: make the fix, send it back, I tell you if it worked. If I can't find anything true to say, you don't pay.